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"she the wind" by Michael pixie john

SF&F Picture 7 out of 11 by Michael pixie john
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the windsylph shows her power indifferent to the will of man or mage
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shifting shapes the rough clump shrubs

are swaying in the storm

heaving headwind races on

and roars across the moor

 

creaking doors and thumping thuds

as from their hinges torn

battered slats are hurled amok and tumbling

to the floor

 

spilling into rocky gullies

spinning leaves in shocks and funnels

curving

coiling

gusting wild

this shenannie somehow riled

and angry at the world

 

into the gaping gulch she dives

to gather speed and menace

fallen trees strewn in her wake

lie helpless torn and finished

 

creatures all will hide and wait

the tempest wreaking vengeance on the tyranny of fate

what e’re the mage proclaim and say

she the wind will have her way

 

 

                                       

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18 Jun 2008:-) Michael pixie john
hi twilight
thanks for visiting my poempages
where are you from in the world ?
~ the idea for this poem came from thinking about the elements
like the wind the sea the forest
and personifying them
usually into the feminine , as in sylph
naiad and dryad
hence ’ she the wind ’
many times ive walked in gales and windies and felt the exhileration
18 Nov 2008:-) Jasmin Islam
This one has a particular rhythm to it that really pulls the reader in. Pure magic, like the rest of your work.
26 Dec 2008:-) Amanda Jane Penrose
Beautiful work! I think I’d better stay inside though ...
30 Jul 2009:-) Thieme Jan Hollaar
I like this one.....nice ..very nice... It kinda captures you and I kept reading it till it was done, an quite quick as well 12 as quick as the wind?! 2
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About 'she the wind':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Michael pixie john
 • Copyright: ©Michael pixie john. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Mage, Tempest, Fate
 • Categories: Faery, Fay, Faeries, Romance, Emotion, Love, Celtic
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