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Michael pixie john

"luna" by Michael pixie john

SF&F Picture 4 out of 11 by Michael pixie john
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i was thinking about goddesses and luna came to mind , i imagined her as witness to all kinds of elementals and personifications of the natural world , and wrote down how she might see a seastorm
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luna

 

the raging salt packed wind 

was wild illusion in her fevered head

yet the sylph of western breezes writhed in the fearsome fury of the storm

shell boats tossed across the bay lay crumpled on the sand

while out to sea the siren smiled

in the whipped and swirling crimson

her iron eyes adored the sky

as sunbeams chanced to peep through the frenzied mad melee

she danced to see them glitter on the spray

laughed her lucky laugh

dived deep among the kelp and hid away

 

these shores so splendid in their ruin

the sea the sylphwind on the run

red seafire of the passing sun

and jagged lashed

the rocks hold fort before the land 

sure luna would not summon such ferocity at night

her lure the gentle silver scattering of light

 

 

                                           

 

←- the irish harp | the path that never ends -→

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15 Jul 2008:-) Sandra van Iersel
This is so beautifull written. And every sentence makes me visualise (bet I spelled that wrong). It really makes me imagine. I like it
1 Aug 2008:-) Vilde D. Ulriksen
oh, this is really beautiful. Just love it.
5 Aug 2009:-) Natalie Adams
captivating, i was hanging on every word. I think this would be lovely to put illustrations to - maybe watercolours? Depicting some of the imagery you have so clevery crafted in the poem.
Another beautiful piece.
22 Sep 2009:-) Donna Nelms
Your work is very special. You can write pictures! With just a few phrases, you capture the moment. D
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About 'luna':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Michael pixie john
 • Copyright: ©Michael pixie john. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Luna, Siren, Sylph
 • Categories: Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Romance, Emotion, Love, Mermaids, Leviathans, Underwater Creatures, Celtic
 • Views: 480


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